The Ultimate Realization of My Dream

People say that I am a good salesman and that I can make a good living out of it. But when I truly search myself, I know that my stints as a clerk, cashier, and salesperson were only stepping stones to the ultimate realization of my dream, that is, to be able to go to med school. With my pre-med degree in Life Science, I can say that I’m ready to take next step and start fulfilling my life-long goal. Through the ____ program, I would like to work my way through and become a successful patient coordinator. The word-class training and instruction the ____ University can provide me will help me gain more experience in the hospital environment and become a highly skilled health care specialist. With my experience in customer relations, proven people skills, and passion for the medical field, I believe that I have what it takes to make it through this path, with the help of the program.


I. Introduction

A. Stepping stones to my real goal

i. I’m a good salesman according to a lot of people. However, when I search myself, I know that my real passion lies in the medical field.
ii. I’ve worked as a cashier, clerk, and held many sales jobs before, but these are only stepping stones so I could go to med school.
iii. I worked my through earning a bachelor’s degree in Life Science as a pre-med.

B. Applying for the _____ program

i. The program will help me earn a medical degree through world-class instruction and training methods.
ii. My goal is to become a patient coordinator and be able to work in a hospital environment.
iii. I believe that my experience, proven customer relations skills, and passion will help me succeed.

II. My work experience and educational background

A. Education and affiliation

i. I earned a degree in Life Science as a pre-med.
ii. I completed a course for echocardiogram technicians and phlebotomy technicians in 2009.
iii. I was awarded the High School Advanced Regents Diploma and was a member of Red Cross Club in high school.
iv. I’m a member of the _____ Honor’s Society from 2006 until now.
v. I was part of the symposium on research and creative experience in 2010.
vi. I was part of the the research conducted among undergraduate and graduate students that will be published by _____ University.

B. Volunteer experience

i. I am a volunteer lab technician and researcher for a medical science pavillion from March 2010 until now.
ii. I was a volunteer research analyst for _____, where I researched about Alzheimer cases and the behavior of patients.
iii. I was a tutor/counselor for ___ Public Library from 2004 to 2006.

C. Work experience

i. I worked as a real estate salesman for _______ in New York from 2007 to 2009.
ii. I also worked as a recreation attendant, cash clerk, customer service advisor, and customer service staff and clerk to support myself and be able to earn a pre-med degree.

D. Skills and character traits

i. From my experiences, I gained intermediate knowledge of Microsoft Office/Windows OS/ A+ Certification.
ii. I am also an NHA-certified EKG technician and phlebotomy technician.
iii. I have good people skills, ability to solve problems and quickly respond to situations, and have become very analytical.
iv. My experience will speak for themselves and show that I am hardworking, responsible, and committed.

Carving a Better Future for Myself

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Born with breathing problems, I always feel weak, especially when coming down from high fevers. I had great difficulty at an early age of 6, and because of my condition, I had to stay mostly in the hospital or at home, deprived of the careless fun kids would enjoy outside. I even remember watching other kids with envy, as they play in the park or simply hang out with their friends. But the thing I missed the most back then is being able to go to school everyday. So when I recovered, going to school became a privilege for me. It was an opportunity for me to make something out of my life, from being a frail 6-year old to someone who believes that there are far better opportunities out there waiting to be explored. It was, indeed, a roller coaster ride for me, with my fair share of highs and lows, but I never stopped struggling to get on top and stand up after every fall. This same wisdom, I believe, is the key to my future success, so I am applying for your ____ college program, hopeful that I will be able to get the proper training and education I need to succeed in life.


I. Introduction

A. Struggles at a young age of six

i. I was born with breathing problems, so I always feel weak and suffer from high fevers,
ii. Because of my health condition, I missed going to school everyday and playing with other kids in the park.

B. Going to school

i. When I grew older and recovered, going to school became a privilege for me, since I’ve missed out on a lot of things when I was frail and young.
ii. Things weren’t easy for me, but I struggled to make it through.

C. Unwavering determination

i. Unfazed by many struggles in the past, I am taking the opportunity to create a better life through college education.
ii. I am applying for the program so I can get the training and education I need to succeed later in my chosen career and with my personal goals.

II. Going to school

A. My personal experience and interests

i. Going to school is an opportunity for me to learn new things and interact with other people my age.
ii. I was involved in many club activities, and even participated in charities.

B. Helping others

i. I worked as a tutor at Kumon, spent a summer working as a hospital volunteer, and enjoyed reading to other kids in the library.

III. What I’ve learned from my experience

A. Becoming a better person

i. All the good and bad experiences helped me be a better individual.
ii. I spend time doing work for charities and community activities, allowing me to hone my leadership skills and strong sense of involvement.

B. Believing that I’m a perfect fit for the ____ University

i. I have good potentials as a leader and has learned a lot from various club and community involvements.
ii. I am dedicated and responsible, after going through a lot of tough times in the past.
iii. I believe I can contribute much to the school community with my interests, values, willingness to share my knowledge and learn more from others.

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I am from a family of farmers in Guyana, South Africa. I grew up tilling the land and tending to animals. Due to my father’s desire to give us a better life, he started a small grocery shop. The whole family pitched in the operations of our small store. Before long, I found myself handling the inventory, ordering system and assisted in the bookkeeping. However, our grocery store was robbed. Due to the losses we encountered, we did not reopen the store. We went back to farming. However, this did not stop me from pursuing and achieving my goals.


I. A Life of Hardship
A. I am from a family of farmers from Africa.
B. We opened a grocery store to add to our income. However, the store was robbed and we lost everything.
C. Despite losing our source of income, we continued on, reverting back to farming.
D. This taught me to be strong so that I can still pursue my dreams. I should not give up easily.

II. Perseverance
A. After graduating from school at the age of 16, I was invited to teach in the local school.
B. I handled subjects like Mathematics and Accounting.
C. When our family migrated to the United States, I wasted no time in attending additional courses that will help me earn more for my family.
D. I obtained a certification for Medical Billing.

III. Continuing Education
A. Despite the additional training in Medical Billing, I find my knowledge in business to be lacking.
B. I was able to obtain a bachelor’s degree in Finance/Investments with a minor in Political Science.
C. However, I feel the need to pursue additional education in the field of business.
D. ____ College will be able to answer my needs for continued education in the field that I chose.

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Admission essay excerpt:

Even as a little boy, I’ve always been very curious with everything that’s going on around me.  I seek new ways to learn and gain experience in everything I do, be it in horseback riding, watching movies, or reading the newspapers.  This same drive pushes me to achieve more.  Being a skilled communicator myself and having mastered two languages, Arabic and English, I found my niche in the academic world as a lecturer for some of the well-known universities and institutes in Bahrain, where I teach science- and business-related subjects.  Teaching has been my passion as it feeds my desire to learn more, apply new ideas, lead people, and help young students realize their true potentials, the way I did back in college.  Seeing the vast world of opportunities before me, I want to take a step further to enhance my skills and explore more career options.  This realization led to my aspiration to apply for the ___ graduate program of ________ University.

Sample outline:

I.  Introduction

A.  Personal traits
i.  seeking new ways to learn and gain experience in everything
ii.  driven to achieve more
iii.  skilled communicator (fluent in Arabic and English)
iv.  teaching is my passion

B.  Why I’m interested in applying for the ___program at ___ University

i.  to explore more opportunities
ii.  to further enhance my skills in research, etc.
iii.  to consider more career options with the help of the program
iv.  to be able to apply new ideas and become a better leader

C.  Career objective

i.  to land a challenging position with a reputable organization that will enable me to expand my knowledge and experience in order to enhance my scope

II.  Academic experience

A.  B.S. (Chemistry science) –  University Of Bahrain, 1996
B.  PMP (Professional Management Project) – Novotech, 2010
C.  MBA ( Master of Business and Administration ) AMA International University Bahrain, 2006
D.  QMS Audit (ISO 9001:2008),2010
E.  PCT professional certified trainer, Canada, 2012

III.  Work experience

A.  2010 – lecturer (AAT, Delmon University)
i.  teaches all subjects related to science and business
B.  2006 – lecturer –BTI (Bahrain Training Institute)
i.  teaches all subjects related to science and business
C.  2006 – lecturer – Delmon University – (part time)
i.  teaches all subjects related to science and business
D.  1999 – administration supervisor – Safra School
E.  1996 – 1999 Assistant Manager (R&D), Dep. – Awal Plastic Company

IV.  Personal qualities

A.  Skills and personal traits

i.  excellent leadership skills and people management
ii.  has a good sense of urgency
iii.  strong interpersonal relations skills
iv.  excellent problem solving skills
v.  has team work spirit
vi.  skilled communicator and writer
vii.  driven to learn (apply new ideas)
viii.  fluent in English and Arabic, written and spoken
ix.  proficient in Microsoft Office applications

B.  Interests

i.  reading newspapers
ii.  football
iii.  horseback riding
iv.  swimming
v.  watching movies

V.  Why I’ve chosen the ___ University

i.  It offers a _____ program that best matches my goals, objectives, and personal requirements.
ii.  It ensures quality education and world-class training that will open new doors for me.