People say that I am a good salesman and that I can make a good living out of it. But when I truly search myself, I know that my stints as a clerk, cashier, and salesperson were only stepping stones to the ultimate realization of my dream, that is, to be able to go to med school. With my pre-med degree in Life Science, I can say that I’m ready to take next step and start fulfilling my life-long goal. Through the ____ program, I would like to work my way through and become a successful patient coordinator. The word-class training and instruction the ____ University can provide me will help me gain more experience in the hospital environment and become a highly skilled health care specialist. With my experience in customer relations, proven people skills, and passion for the medical field, I believe that I have what it takes to make it through this path, with the help of the program.

Outline:

I. Introduction

A. Stepping stones to my real goal

i. I’m a good salesman according to a lot of people. However, when I search myself, I know that my real passion lies in the medical field.
ii. I’ve worked as a cashier, clerk, and held many sales jobs before, but these are only stepping stones so I could go to med school.
iii. I worked my through earning a bachelor’s degree in Life Science as a pre-med.

B. Applying for the _____ program

i. The program will help me earn a medical degree through world-class instruction and training methods.
ii. My goal is to become a patient coordinator and be able to work in a hospital environment.
iii. I believe that my experience, proven customer relations skills, and passion will help me succeed.

II. My work experience and educational background

A. Education and affiliation

i. I earned a degree in Life Science as a pre-med.
ii. I completed a course for echocardiogram technicians and phlebotomy technicians in 2009.
iii. I was awarded the High School Advanced Regents Diploma and was a member of Red Cross Club in high school.
iv. I’m a member of the _____ Honor’s Society from 2006 until now.
v. I was part of the symposium on research and creative experience in 2010.
vi. I was part of the the research conducted among undergraduate and graduate students that will be published by _____ University.

B. Volunteer experience

i. I am a volunteer lab technician and researcher for a medical science pavillion from March 2010 until now.
ii. I was a volunteer research analyst for _____, where I researched about Alzheimer cases and the behavior of patients.
iii. I was a tutor/counselor for ___ Public Library from 2004 to 2006.

C. Work experience

i. I worked as a real estate salesman for _______ in New York from 2007 to 2009.
ii. I also worked as a recreation attendant, cash clerk, customer service advisor, and customer service staff and clerk to support myself and be able to earn a pre-med degree.

D. Skills and character traits

i. From my experiences, I gained intermediate knowledge of Microsoft Office/Windows OS/ A+ Certification.
ii. I am also an NHA-certified EKG technician and phlebotomy technician.
iii. I have good people skills, ability to solve problems and quickly respond to situations, and have become very analytical.
iv. My experience will speak for themselves and show that I am hardworking, responsible, and committed.

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Born with breathing problems, I always feel weak, especially when coming down from high fevers. I had great difficulty at an early age of 6, and because of my condition, I had to stay mostly in the hospital or at home, deprived of the careless fun kids would enjoy outside. I even remember watching other kids with envy, as they play in the park or simply hang out with their friends. But the thing I missed the most back then is being able to go to school everyday. So when I recovered, going to school became a privilege for me. It was an opportunity for me to make something out of my life, from being a frail 6-year old to someone who believes that there are far better opportunities out there waiting to be explored. It was, indeed, a roller coaster ride for me, with my fair share of highs and lows, but I never stopped struggling to get on top and stand up after every fall. This same wisdom, I believe, is the key to my future success, so I am applying for your ____ college program, hopeful that I will be able to get the proper training and education I need to succeed in life.

Outline:

I. Introduction

A. Struggles at a young age of six

i. I was born with breathing problems, so I always feel weak and suffer from high fevers,
ii. Because of my health condition, I missed going to school everyday and playing with other kids in the park.

B. Going to school

i. When I grew older and recovered, going to school became a privilege for me, since I’ve missed out on a lot of things when I was frail and young.
ii. Things weren’t easy for me, but I struggled to make it through.

C. Unwavering determination

i. Unfazed by many struggles in the past, I am taking the opportunity to create a better life through college education.
ii. I am applying for the program so I can get the training and education I need to succeed later in my chosen career and with my personal goals.

II. Going to school

A. My personal experience and interests

i. Going to school is an opportunity for me to learn new things and interact with other people my age.
ii. I was involved in many club activities, and even participated in charities.

B. Helping others

i. I worked as a tutor at Kumon, spent a summer working as a hospital volunteer, and enjoyed reading to other kids in the library.

III. What I’ve learned from my experience

A. Becoming a better person

i. All the good and bad experiences helped me be a better individual.
ii. I spend time doing work for charities and community activities, allowing me to hone my leadership skills and strong sense of involvement.

B. Believing that I’m a perfect fit for the ____ University

i. I have good potentials as a leader and has learned a lot from various club and community involvements.
ii. I am dedicated and responsible, after going through a lot of tough times in the past.
iii. I believe I can contribute much to the school community with my interests, values, willingness to share my knowledge and learn more from others.