There exists in some people an innate desire to look after the welfare of their fellow human beings. This motivation can be traced back to either the challenges they’ve experienced during their formative years, or the simple fact that medicine and the human body is a subject and an entity that they wish to further study. I believe in the virtues of being a doctor. The delicate balancing act required to provide both effective healthcare and personalized service is a challenge that I look forward to dealing with. Whether this is something I will be good at remains to be seen, but I am certain that I will be interested enough to always give my best, regardless of my intellectual limitations.

Outline

I. Introduction

A. History of my motivation to study medicine

B. My family background and my experiences

C. My chosen specialization and how it will motivate me to challenge the norms and excel in my field

II. My past achievements as a student

A. I have immersed myself in various co- and extra-curricular activities and groups to prepare myself for the challenges ahead, namely staying focused and determined to finish what I started.

B. I have been recognized many times for my achievements in the past. This has been part of the driving force why I’m pursuing this.

C. I’ve had wonderful opportunities to gain hands-on experience in my chosen field. I volunteered for several missions and programs which gave me an extremely realistic image of what my chosen profession will be like when I finish my studies.

III. My choice of medical institution

A. History and academic focus – Your institution, I believe, will offer me the experience and credibility that I’ll need to stay determined to eventually finish my studies.

B. Location – The location of your facilities is perfect for my needs.

C. Quality of education – This school is known for its high quality optometry education.