{"id":165,"date":"2009-05-06T09:02:47","date_gmt":"2009-05-06T09:02:47","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/?p=165"},"modified":"2015-09-18T09:07:11","modified_gmt":"2015-09-18T09:07:11","slug":"personal-statement-example-how-to-cover-up-flaws-when-writing-an-admission-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/2009\/05\/06\/personal-statement-example-how-to-cover-up-flaws-when-writing-an-admission-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"Personal Statement Example: How to Cover up Flaws when Writing an Admission Essay"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>When applying to a post-secondary school, you will probably be asked to write an admission essay of some sort.\u00a0 At first, it may seem like extra work, but there are some great benefits to writing a personal statement.\u00a0 Perhaps the best benefit is that you can use the essay to explain or cover up some of the flaws on your resume or transcripts.(1)\u00a0 Here\u2019s how to cover up flaws when writing your admission essay:<\/p>\n<p>Infuse humor and narratives to tone down your shortcomings and failures<\/p>\n<p>Some personal statement examples employ humor and narratives to downplay the shortcomings and failures of the applicants.\u00a0 Using humor is a good way to diffuse the issue.\u00a0 However, it is still important that the overall tone of your essay is still serious and reflective.(2)\u00a0 When using narratives, it is important not to focus too much on the bad and highlight the good instead, such as how you have learned from such shortcomings and failures.<\/p>\n<p>Make your failure seem like an eye-opener or life-changing experience<\/p>\n<p>Another approach used in many personal statement examples is to explain how you have come to your senses as a result of going through such challenging times.\u00a0 Try to concentrate on how you have come to a deeper realization of who you are, the challenges you have faced, and how certain hardships have helped you make the decision to change your life for the better. Try not to be too idealistic when taking this approach and, instead take a more mellow and sober tone.\u00a0 To help you with this task, you can read a few good examples of personal statement that made it through college admission.<\/p>\n<p>Use your shortcomings as source of motivation and inspiration<\/p>\n<p>Another option is to discuss how such shortcomings and failures have given your the inspiration and motivation to set your life straight.\u00a0 Some examples of personal statements will show you to discuss priorities and goals that have changed as a result of going through life challenges.\u00a0 Mention how you have the drive to make things better for yourself and for those around you.(3)\u00a0 Finally,be sure to write about how you are now motivated to make it through college and turn your life around.<\/p>\n<p>(1)\u00a0 http:\/\/www.foothill.edu\/transfer\/essay.html<br \/>\n(2)\u00a0 http:\/\/gradschool.about.com\/od\/essaywriting\/a\/psfaq.htm<br \/>\n(3)\u00a0 http:\/\/www.gcc.mass.edu\/offices\/transfer\/essay_tips.html<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>When applying to a post-secondary school, you will probably be asked to write an admission essay of some sort.\u00a0 At first, it may seem like extra work, but there are some great benefits to writing a personal statement.\u00a0 Perhaps the best benefit is that you can use the essay to explain or cover up some [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[3],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-165","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-personal-statement-writing-guide"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/165"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=165"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/165\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":166,"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/165\/revisions\/166"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=165"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=165"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=165"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}