{"id":198,"date":"2009-05-24T09:51:30","date_gmt":"2009-05-24T09:51:30","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/?p=198"},"modified":"2015-09-18T07:54:35","modified_gmt":"2015-09-18T07:54:35","slug":"tips-on-how-to-discuss-sensitive-themes-in-your-admission-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/examplesofpersonalstatements.com\/index.php\/2009\/05\/24\/tips-on-how-to-discuss-sensitive-themes-in-your-admission-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"Tips on How to Discuss Sensitive Themes in Your Admission Essay"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>When applying to a post-secondary educational institution, one of the most significant admission requirements is the admission essay.\u00a0 Writing an admission essay is not an easy task, and it seems that the task only becomes more daunting when you have to discuss sensitive themes.\u00a0 If you have to write about sensitive issues in your personal statement, it is important that you do so with tact, honesty, and sincerity.(1)\u00a0 You can do better if you can find good examples of personal statement that tackle these kinds of topics.\u00a0 Here are some good tips:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Examples of personal statement: Be honest but tactful<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>One of the golden rules when composing your admission essay is to be honest and tactful.\u00a0 It is important that you get the story and the hardship across to the reader, but do so in a manner that is not offensive or insensitive.\u00a0 Perhaps the biggest mistake that you can make when writing your admission essay is to fabricate information in an attempt to make your personal statement seem more interesting or compelling.\u00a0 Take the high road and be honest instead, because admission committees frown upon lies and plagiarism.(2)<\/p>\n<p><strong>Personal statement examples: Don\u2019t try too hard to persuade readers but feed them with positive information<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Another mistake that some people make on the admission essay is that they try to hard to persuade the reader about what a terrible or difficult time they had.\u00a0 Your point isn\u2019t to tell a sob story about your life, but to show that you can focus on the positive aspects despite the numerous challenges that you had to endure.\u00a0 If you are able to elaborate the positive aspects in your essay, then the reader will be more likley to focus on this side of the story as well.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Examples of personal statements: Focus on what makes you a strong candidate<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>In line with focusing on the positive, it\u2019s important to talk about why you make a strong candidate as an applicant to the school.\u00a0 The mark of any great admission essay is when the author is able to express how such sensitive topics and difficult experiences have made them a better person.\u00a0 Focus on how the character traits, values, and virtues that you have developed through such experience have prepared you to deal with the challenges that you are likely to face in college and beyond.(3)<\/p>\n<p>(1)\u00a0 http:\/\/www.unc.edu\/depts\/wcweb\/handouts\/application.html<br \/>\n(2)\u00a0 http:\/\/apps.carleton.edu\/admissions\/apply\/essay_tips\/<br \/>\n(3)\u00a0 http:\/\/www.rpi.edu\/web\/writingcenter\/gradapp.html<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>When applying to a post-secondary educational institution, one of the most significant admission requirements is the admission essay.\u00a0 Writing an admission essay is not an easy task, and it seems that the task only becomes more daunting when you have to discuss sensitive themes.\u00a0 If you have to write about sensitive issues in your personal 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